WALT: hook my audience in with a catchy start.
On a miserable dreadful frosty Sunday morning in the middle of the holidays I had to get up so early, it felt like I had never been to sleep before I was so tired.
My friend (Ruby) and my friends parents were about to pick me up to go to Hanmer Springs. The car felt like it kept on going on and on, but it had only been 20 minutes that I had been in the car. Once we arrived at the steaming hot pools we checked in and got a wristband for the hydro slide.
Ruby and I first ran to the hydroslide with excitement she was a little afraid at first but I somehow talked her into doing it with me. It was such a long line just to go down one little hydroslide and it wasn't fun standing and waiting in the drizzling frozen day and it didn’t help when we went in the cold water on the hydroslide.
After we went to the hot pools we went out for lunch I got a big burger and we went back home but we wanted a sleepover so we asked and we were allowed to have one. So I went home and got my stuff and went to her house. When we got to Ruby’s house we watched some netball on there T.V. Then it was late so we went to bed.
In the morning we were so tired that we slept in to 9:50 and we went to QEII pool just for a swim. Then we came home and had some lunch we had fried chicken and fries. It was amazing we then played some netball outside. After that I was allowed to stay for dinner so I stayed for dinner and then we went to the dairy and got some lollies. We decided to watch a movie with our full of sugar lollies. My dad then came as soon as our movie finished then I went home and hung out with my family.
What did you do in the holidays?
I love your story with good detail well done.In the holidays i went to Akaroa.Next time you could use your own photos💙
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ReplyDeleteI like how you have added the photos but I think maybe next time you could make it less writing and make it easier to see the word i went to Hanmer as well
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