Thursday, 2 July 2020

Haikus!

                                W.A.L.T Write a Haiku following the correct structure.
A Haiku is a traditional Japanese Poem, 
A syllable is a sound of the word.
A Haiku has three lines, there are 5 syllables on the first line, 7 on the second line, and 5 on the last line. These are some of my Haikus.

                                                                         Netball
                                                                 Im playing netball,
it gets cold in the mornings,
I hate warming up

Rain
Its raining today,
I wish I could go outside,
But I will get wet.


Today Im tired,
I could fall asleep right now,
but Im not allowed.

Phone
My phone case is red,
I love to go on my phone,
I dont get bored.

Have you ever mad a Haiku?

2 comments:

  1. Hi charlotte
    I love your haiku poems.
    maby next time you cloud put some full stops into the end to the first poem about netball.
    I specifically love the one about rain because it is very relatiblle and i love your choice of words.
    what is your favorite haiku out of all of them ?

    meg

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  2. And yes i have made some haiku's before

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