Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 26 August 2021
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Kia ora Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have covered the important aspects of this event. You have the date (when), what happened (what), who was involved (who), how they did it (how). Next time it would be great to see where this happened and maybe a quote or a statement.
If I was to write it, I would have an interview statement from Kate Sheppard as you get be creative and imagine what she was thinking at the time.