Todays task for reading I imagined myself as Haora in the text I read the other day and wrote down what he must of been feeling, what he could smell, what he can hear, what he saw, touched, and tasted in one part of the text I read. This is my text:
How do you reckon Haora was feeling at this moment?
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Ka pai on using great description. You have used figurative language and the senses well!
ReplyDeleteI can tell the Haora was feeling curious as he pushed back the harakeke to see and that he was shocked when he saw the book. I really like the line 'his heart dropped to his stomach'.
Do you like doing descriptive writing?