W.A.L.T Write an engaging narrative.
In writing I have been writing a narrative about this guy that gets into a plane crash and hes an only survivor and he was in the middle of no where.
He screamed for help ¨HELP,¨ no one responded he then knew he was in trouble. (5 hours earlier) ¨Hurry up JJ, you will miss your flight,¨ Said Kiara. JJ put his bags in the car and Kiara drove him to the airport.
¨Do I really have to go try to find my mum?¨ asked JJ.
¨Of course you have too, it's time you met her,¨ Said Kiara while going to hug JJ.
¨bye, love you,¨ Said JJ hugging Kiara back.
JJ got on his flight and was nervous to see his mother. After a few hours of flying JJ saw the flight attendants running up and down the aisle, he was kind of confused but didn't think much of it. He looked out the window and saw that he was in the middle of nowhere, the plane at that moment started shaking and going up and down with everyone screaming in the back but all JJ heard was a ringing noise that he didn't like. The flight attendants started yelling ¨Everyone get back to your seats.¨ Then they started shouting to everyone ¨Brace, Brace get your heads down, Put on your seat belts,¨ JJ did as he was told, putting his hands behind his head. All of a sudden the plane crashed straight to the ground, everyone flung off their seats and for most of them were dead.
JJ woke up and felt his head he checked his hand and saw there was blood all over his hand, he screamed for help ¨HELP,¨ no one responded he then knew he was in trouble. He got up and sat straight back down with a saw pain in his leg. He checked outside and saw that he must have been knocked out over night because it looked like there was a sunrise. He dragged himself out of the plane and looked at the plane cut in half with the tail trying to reach for the sky. It was that high up in the air. There was dirt smashed all over the plane. Eventually JJ tried calling someone but had no service, so he looked around and saw a building in the far distance, he started to run but it didn't work so he started to limp with one foot dragging behind the other putting all his weight on to his other foot. He had gotten closer to the building to realise it looked like an abandoned hospital, so he went in and called for help ¨HELP, IS ANYONE IN HERE,¨ He heard no response. So he got bandages and started to put pressure on his leg and wrapped it up, then he got band aids and put them on his cuts on his head. After JJ had wrapped his wounds he saw a cafeteria and started eating disgusting cafeteria food.m After some feasting JJ heard a strange noise from one of the rooms, so he went and checked it out. His stomach had a turning feeling as if he had just got off a rollercoaster. JJ slowly turned the handle leading to the room he opened it and what he saw was people?
He asked ¨Who are you guys?¨
¨My girlfriend Sarah was in a Coma and she got abandoned in a hospital, and we don't know our way out so that's how we are here¨ Said this tall dude who had a bruise on his eyes with long parted hair.
¨So how did you get here tall guy?¨ Said JJ waiting for a response.
¨Oh, Well the nurses stuck a needle in my leg and I woke up about 1hour ago,¨ Said the tall guy.
¨How did you get here?¨ Said the tall guy's girlfriend.
¨Well, I got in a plane crash and I'm the only survivor,¨ Said JJ sadly.
¨Oh my gosh are you ok?¨ Said The tall guy and his girlfriend at the same time.
¨Yeah I'm fine,¨ Exclaimed JJ.
There was an awkward silence.
¨So what are your names?¨ Asked JJ trying to fill in the silence.
¨ I'm John B and this is my girlfriend Sarah,¨ Said John B pointing to his blonde hair small faced girlfriend with good style.
¨Well I'm hungry. Do you guys want some cafeteria food?¨ Said Sarah, hoping to hear a yes from the boys.
¨Well I just ate some cafeteria food, so I'm not too hungry,¨ Said JJ rubbing his stomach in circles.
They still all headed to the cafeteria, and John B and Sarah started eating some cafeteria food. Then JJ tried to look for some service running around the hospital, JJ got mad that he couldn't get any service so he punched the wall. He started breathing heavily and was sweating. JJ went back to the cafeteria and told the others that there was no service. There was a moment of silence as they all thought the same idea that they would never get out of here.
¨Right, we need a plan to get out of here because I'm sick of this cafeteria food,¨ Said John B with him getting louder with every word.
¨Calm down,¨ Said Sarah. ¨We will get out of here we just gotta have hope,¨ As she added to her sentence.
¨HOPE?¨ Yelled John B. ¨HOPE?¨ Repeating himself. ¨We can't just hope someone has to save us.¨ John B yelling to everyone.
¨Yes we need hope to get outta here otherwise we will never come outta here,¨ Sarah yelling at John B.
¨Ok, Everyone stop yelling, we can't get outta here if we are angry and are annoyed at each other ok,¨ Yelling back at the two of them JJ said.
They then all heard a chopping kind of sound coming from outside.
¨What's that?¨ Questioned Sarah.
¨I think that's a HELICOPTER,¨ JJ yelled.
They all looked at each other and smiled and sprinted outside going in a line one after another. They saw the helicopter landing right by the plane. ¨HEY, OVER HERE,HELP,¨ Yelled Sarah and JJ at the same time waving their hands at the top of their heads jumping up and down. But Nobody heard them.
The pilots of the helicopter went and checked out the plane to see if anyone survived.
¨This is not good, and I don't think there were any surprises,¨ Said the Pilot.
Sarah John B and JJ still couldn't get there attention.