This is some of my Narrative writing!
¨So what are your names?¨ Asked JJ trying to fill in the silence.
¨ I'm John B and this is my girlfriend Sarah,¨ Said John B.
¨Well I'm hungry. Do you guys want some cafeteria food?¨ Said Sarah, hoping to hear a yes from the boys.
¨Well I just ate some cafeteria food, so I'm not too hungry,¨ Said JJ rubbing his stomach in circles.
They still all headed to the cafeteria, and John B and Sarah started eating some cafeteria food. Then JJ tried to look for some service running around the hospital, JJ got mad that he couldn't get any service so he punched the wall. He started breathing heavily and was sweating. JJ went back to the cafeteria and told the others that there was no service.
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