For writing we got to write a narrative on whatever we want and mine is about this guy that gets into a plane crash and is in the middle of nowhere and cant find anyone, and Im going to show you a little bit of my writing.
He screamed for help ¨HELP,¨ no one responded he then knew he was in trouble. (5 hours earlier) ¨Hurry up JJ, you will miss your flight,¨ Said Kiara. JJ put his bags in the car and Kiara drove him to the airport. ¨Do I really have to go try find my mum?¨ asked JJ. ¨Of course you have too its time you met her,¨ Said Kiara while going to hug JJ. ¨bye, love you,¨ Said JJ hugging Kiara back. JJ got on his flight and was nervous to see his mother. After a few hours of flying JJ saw the flight attendants running up and down the isle, he was kind of confused but didnt thing much of it. He looked out the window and saw that he was in the middle of no where, the plane at that moment started shaking and going up and down with eveyone was screaming in the back but all JJ heard was a ringing noise that he didnt like. The flight attendants started yelling ¨Everyone get back to your seats.¨ Then they started shouting to everyone ¨Brace, Brace get your heads down,¨ JJ did as he was told, putting his hands behind his head. All of a sudden impact came the plane crashed straight to the ground everyone flung of there seats and for what most of them were dead.
That was Just a little a little bit of my story, so I hope you enjoyed.
Have you ever written a narative?
Wednesday, 10 June 2020
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Hi Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your writing. I love the detail you have used.
Make sure that you use paragraphs or use new lines for new speakers. This will make it easier for the reader to read and understand what is happening.