Tuesday, 16 June 2020

My Narrative!

              Today for writing we had to get a little bit of our writing and post it to our blog!



   
When they were planning to escape they heard a noise that sounded like a helicopter so they all ran outside and saw a helicopter. ¨HEY, OVER HERE, HELP.¨ Screamed Sarah while waving her arms in the air trying to get the helicopters attention.

                                               Do you like my narrative so far?

3 comments:

  1. hi Charlotte, i like your blog post I cant wait to see it published.

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  2. Hello Charlotte,
    It is Tallulah I really love your work that you have been posting to your blog this week.
    I am so excited to see the final product of your story that you are writing,maybe next time add more info about what your are writing for and what is the purpose.
    Great work Charlotte

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  3. Hi Charlotte,I like your theme,it makes me excited to read the rest of your story.

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