Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 16 June 2020
My Narrative!
When they were planning to escape they heard a noise that sounded like a helicopter so they all ran outside and saw a helicopter. ¨HEY, OVER HERE, HELP.¨ Screamed Sarah while waving her arms in the air trying to get the helicopters attention.
Do you like my narrative so far?
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
hi Charlotte, i like your blog post I cant wait to see it published.
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ReplyDeleteIt is Tallulah I really love your work that you have been posting to your blog this week.
I am so excited to see the final product of your story that you are writing,maybe next time add more info about what your are writing for and what is the purpose.
Great work Charlotte
Hi Charlotte,I like your theme,it makes me excited to read the rest of your story.
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