Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 16 April 2020
Dolphin summary!
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Hi Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your reading. I love how you summarised the passage in your own words. I think you got the most important facts. Why are the New Zealand dolphins easy to identify? Maybe add what it is that they are identified by.
I would love to see you try and write your summary in a paragraph instead of bullet points.
Hi Charlotte, you have been very busy. You have some interesting facts about dolphins. I also wondered why New Zealand dolphins are easy to identify?
ReplyDeleteIn your summary I would of liked to see a fact from your description 'what does the word mammal mean'.
Have you every seen a dolphin?