Friday, 17 April 2020

Quick Write!

                                        W.A.L.T:Write for a sustained period of time!
She knew it hadn't been a good idea to leave the tap running, but now she was starting to enjoy herself. She looked down into the deep dark blue ocean and saw a turtle, she had a big smile on her face but behind that smile was a petrified face. It started to get a little rocky out at the ocean. So she started to feel a little sick. She took some deep breaths to hold it in. she got a handful of water and rinsed of her face to make her feel fresh. But when she went to go pick some water up she accidentally picked up a starfish, the girl screamed but all that she could hear was her own echo. She turned around thing land was right behind her. But it wasn't. She tried turning the bath around she did that successfully until the bath stopped moving and was getting ready to sink.¨NO” the girl yelled. She had a talent of talking to animals so she started talking to the turtle, and she said ¨help me can you and your friends move the bath all together¨ the turtle agreed on it. And on the count of three, all of the turtles picked up the bath and started swimming so fast. They let go and the girl was off, she was ready to go back home. After a little while of waiting she had to put all her weight on the left side to turn to the left. And then the right side and then the left. Until what she saw was her house with the bathroom door slightly open ready for her to go back in. she slides through her house past her mum, but her mum doesn't see. She opens the door more and puts the bath where its supposed to be. She slams the door behind her and gets in the bath as if nothing happened. Her mum knocks on the door and comes in ¨are you alright dear¨ the little girl responds with ¨of course I was just in the bath the whole time¨ and she giggled a little. THE END!


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