Tuesday, 21 April 2020

New York Is Falling!

New York is falling!
The words rang in Jim’s head. They were the last words to crackle out of the
radio before it stopped broadcasting. That had been three days ago.
Jim had not heard any words since then. It was like something
had happened to manhattan, because that's where they record on the radio.

So Jim decided he wanted to go on a drive to see what's going on. He was thinking of the
worst and all this negativity was in the air whilst he yelled for a taxi. The taxi stopped, Jim said
¨manhattan please¨. They were driving for what felt forever it had only been 10 minutes though.
As he had butterflies going up and down his body he waited and waited for manhattan to arrive…

Jim had arrived at the start of manhattan, it looked like war. There were grey skies, buildings had fallen down,
and crying people. The taxi driver pulled over ¨come on let's go back¨! ¨NO, I'm staying but you can go back¨.
¨ok but be safe¨   ¨wait when you get back send lots of taxi drivers¨ said Jim. ¨I will¨ said the taxi driver. 

Jim got out of the car and ran to some people crying and begging for help. Jim asked what's happening,
¨there's been a fire in a building with lots of people in there¨ . Jim told them to go over to the sidewalk and
start walking back, someone will pull over. Jim ran and saved people and told them to start running back.

 Jim decided to go into the building, other buildings started to collapse. That's when he started to get a move on.
He helped people get out of the building, he was gonna go and leave Manhattan but he heard one more scream and it was on the top level.
Everyone started to get in taxis and leave. Jim heard sirens but he wanted to do something. 

He got past the fire up 50 lofts of stairs and heard one more loud scream. Jim saw the girl her leg was stuck under the table,
Jim lifted the table sacrificing his life. The girl got up and ran. Jim dropped the table and carried the girl back down outside.
Her mum was so happy to see and thanked Jim lots.

The fire department came and somehow got the fire out. Everyone got out safely and Jim was the new hit. Everyone helped
get Manhattan back to the way it was. And it was a good city.

1 comment:

  1. Morena Charlotte, your work is off the page, you will need to fix this so I can read your story.

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